Can Anybody Check My Article?

[Jeruk 0]

I decided to blog in English with a lot grammatical errors perhaps. So I hope anybody can check my article and inform the grammar errors. I think this is the best way of learning to write.

If you decided to leave comment about my article, please doing so at http://closepages.blogspot.com

IDEA FOR BLOG:

If you want to start blogging but you still do not have any idea, this is the right article for you. To drive people to your site you need to have contents that suit your readers.

1.Blogging about computer and technology:

-Most of the people that like to surf, usually acttracted to gain information about computer and technology. If you blog about these things, I am sure that your blog will attract a lot of traffic.

-However, you should be aware that the bad side is that most of the current articles that you write will not be relevant after few years later. This is common because technoloy moving so fast and changes happen frequently.

2.Blogging about food / places / vacation :

-Blogging about food seem to be boring however you need to remember the fact that food still remain the same all of the time. If you write about the nasi lemak you eat todak, after 10 years they will still some people that will search for "nasi lemak"

-What I want to say is, although the blog about food seems to drive less traffic than technology, however the contents are always relevant for lifetime. So blogging about food also is not a bad idea.

3.Below I state a list of blog that you can write as a starting platform:

-Game

-fasion

-celebrity

-sports (need to update frequently)

Besides, you should also aware of a few things before you start blogging:

1.Does your blog contents always relevant?

-If you blogging about sports but do not like to update, your content will not be relevant anymore and thus your site will have bad ranking in search engine.

2.How much your competitor is?

-Just my opinion, I think that having a less competitor is good. Why? Let say that I am writing about famous technology like handset. Maybe my content is good but I need to struggle so that it can reach high page ranking in search engine.

3.Do you prefer common visitor or not?

-If you like your site to have its certain die hard fan, make sure that your blog is specialise. This is because people always find something that specialise.

-If your blog is just like my blog, it's hard to find its loyal visitor. However, you can still depend on search engine.

Then, why I still blogging? There is a simple reason to it. I hope that I can improve my writing skills and and I want to improve my English. So why not I start blogging?? Right now I am trying to blog in English (and I think with a lot of grammar mistakes). So if any of you find grammar errors, I hope that you can correct it by giving comment.

Ha ha, maybe later my blog can be the source for students to learn English...

Edited September 4, 2008 by Jeruk

[cixent 0]

Perfect!!!

[Jeruk 0]

Which is the right one haa??

• I am not sure this is perfect
• I do not sure this is perfect

However, I hope somebody else can also post their articles here so that we can troubleshoot the grammar mistakes together.

[samliv85 0]

Which is the right one haa??

• I am not sure this is perfect
• I do not sure this is perfect

However, I hope somebody else can also post their articles here so that we can troubleshoot the grammar mistakes together.

I prefer 'I am not sure whether this is perfect or not'

correct me if I'm wrong....

[Jeruk 0]

I think it supposed to be correct.

[kodname 0]

I underline the corrections/modifications. There is no guarantee that it's 100% correct. Here it is:

IDEA FOR BLOG:

If you want to start blogging but you still do not have any idea, this is the right article for you. To drive people to your site you need to have content that suit your readers.

1.Blogging about computer and technology:

-Most of the people that like to surf, are usually acttracted to gain information about computer and technology. If you blog about these things, I am sure that your blog will attract a lot of traffic.

-However, you should be aware that the bad side is that most of the current articles that you write will not be relevant a few years later. This is common because technology is moving so fast and changes happen frequently.

2.Blogging about food / places / vacation :

-Blogging about food seems to be boring however you need to remember the fact that food still remain the same all of the time. If you write about the nasi lemak you eat today, after 10 years they will still be some people that will search for "nasi lemak".

-What I want to say is, although a blog about food seems to drive less traffic than technology, however the content is alwaysrelevant for a lifetime. So blogging about food is also not a bad idea.

3.Below I state a list of blogs that you can write as a starting platform:

-Games

-fashion

- celebrities

-sports (need to update frequently)

Besides, you should also be aware of a few things before you start blogging:

1.Is your blog contents always relevant?

-If you [u[are blogging about sports but do not like to update, one day your content will not be relevant anymore and thus your site will havea bad ranking in search engine.

2.How much competitors do you have?

-Just my opinion. I think having less competitors is good. Why? Let us say that I am writing about famous gadgets like handset. Maybe my content is good but I need to struggle so that it can reach a high page ranking in search engines.

3.Do you prefer common visitors or not?

-If you like your site to have its certain die hard fans, make sure that your blog is specialised. This is because people always find something that is specialised.

-If your blog is just like my blog, it's hard to find its loyal visitors. However, you can still depend on search engines.

Then, why I am still blogging? There is a simple reason for it. I hope that I can improve my writing skills and and I want to improve my English. So why don't I start blogging?? Right now I am trying to blog in English (and I think with a lot of grammar mistakes). So if any of you find grammatical errors, I hope that you can correct them by giving comments.

Ha ha, maybe later my blog can be the source for students to learn English...

Edited September 12, 2008 by kodname

[Jeruk 0]

I can see that some of them smell fishy (should contain grammatical errors). However I did not how to make the right sentences for them.

Maybe I should consult my English teacher directly.

[kodname 0]

I can see that some of them smell fishy (should contain grammatical errors). However I did not how to make the right sentences for them.

Maybe I should consult my English teacher directly.

Yes that would be the best choice. It's hard to explain the mistakes in forums because it'd take too much time. Unless you ask us to check one sentence at a time.

[kasyfi 0]

I decided to blog in English with a lot grammatical errors perhaps. So I hope anybody can check my article and inform the grammar errors. I think this is the best way of learning to write.

If you decided to leave comment about my article, please doing so at http://closepages.blogspot.com

IDEA FOR BLOG:

If you want to start blogging but you still do not have any idea, this is the right article for you. In order to drive people to your site you need to have contents that suit your readers.

1.Blogging about computer and technology:

-Most people who like to surf, are usually attracted to gain information about computer and technology. If you blog about these things, I am sure that your blog will attract a lot of traffic.

-However, you should be aware of the bad side which is the articles that you're writing may not be relevant in a few years later. This has become common because technology moves so fast and changes happen frequently.

2.Blogging about food / places / vacation :

-Blogging on food seems sounds quite boring. However you need to remember the fact that food still remain the same all of the time. If you write about nasi lemak you had today, 10 years from now there are always people who will search for "nasi lemak"

-What I want to say is, although the blog about food seems to drive less traffic than technology, however the contents are always relevant for lifetime. So blogging about food is also not a bad idea.

3.Below I state a list of blog that you can write as a starting platform:

-Game

-fashion

-celebrity

-sports (may require frequent updates)

Besides, you should also aware of a few things before you start blogging:

1.Are your blog contents always relevant?

-If you're blogging about sports but do not like to update, your content will not be relevant anymore and thus your site will have bad ranking in the search engine.

2.How many your competitor is?

-Just my opinion, I think that having a less competitor is good. Why? Let say that I am writing about famous technology like handset. Maybe my content is good but I need to struggle so that it can reach high page ranking in search engine.

3.Do you prefer common visitors or not?

-If you like your site to have its certain die hard fan, make sure that your blog is specialized. This is because people always find something that specialized.

-If your blog is just like my blog, it's hard to find its loyal visitor. However, you can still depend on search engine

Then, why am I still blogging? There is a simple reason to it. I hope that I can improve my writing skills and and I want to improve my English. So why not I start blogging?? Right now I am trying to blog in English (and I think with a lot of grammar mistakes). So if any of you find grammar errors, I hope that you can correct it by giving comment.

Ha ha, maybe later my blog can be the source for students to learn English...

my two cents

[crazy_labelle 0]

It is only a blog... and as far am i concern

people do not really cares bout the grammar or spelling wen dey reading a blog....

and if you're not comfortable with using english...

why should u use it in your blog??

a blog for me... is like online diary...

we won't use a perfect tense or grammar in diary... you just write what u know or felt...

most of my friends r comfortable using rojak rather den a formal english...

even though their english is excellent...

i read blog because... it is just like fren to fren communication...

not like a boring-straight formal words used in normal website...

it can be interesting and as long as u put lots of what-u-think and emotions into it...

p/s: anyway... it is just wat i think.... huhuhuhu...

[kasyfi 0]

In writing world, grammar is as much important as the content of the material. Same goes to blogging, which means you turn your piece of writing into technology stuff.

Just imagine, if you write with broken language and lots of grammatical error, it wouldn't be called a written material anymore, it's a crap!

Plus, those errors might as well cut down the mood of interpretation. Or maybe you are fond of driving a broken car..hmmmm

[voluted 0]

In writing world, grammar is as much important as the content of the material. Same goes to blogging, which means you turn your piece of writing into technology stuff.

Just imagine, if you write with broken language and lots of grammatical error, it wouldn't be called a written material anymore, it's a crap!

Plus, those errors might as well cut down the mood of interpretation. Or maybe you are fond of driving a broken car..hmmmm

well said!

i care about my grammar.

i dont care about peoples grammar.

but when i read blog, i want to understand. not confuse with stuff

that happen yesterday or today or tomorrow. thats why tense

is important.

those people who can speak and write english perfect surely

use understandable english in their blog. strange if they

sudenly use bad tense in their blog. not possible rite ? hehe

congrats to jeruk. nice article with nice grammar.

i want to learn to better at english too.

i dont want to use crap english.

i also learn from your article. huhuhu.

im not good to correct your article but keep up good work.

those who know using good grammar but instead

use stupid tense are crap people. hahahaha

my teacher said dont listen to bad advise and dont

follow bad example.

p/s: i triple check my post to correct grammar and tense.

i tink there are still erroes. fuhh sweating.

Edited September 13, 2008 by voluted

[crazy_labelle 0]

uhuhu... it is just my opinion... everyone has one isn't it...

what i wanna state here is that, don't limit yourself in writing...

if u'r too cafefull with your words and grammar especially... you are just limit-ing yourself...

i'm not saying dat using a broken english...

just write simply like everyday communication...

bcoz people tend to read blog to learned it/tech in a simplier form... just like friend-to-friend talk...

haha... nuff said... it aint going no-where... i just write what i feel...

and i do not care bout my grammars... or else, i just write a few sentences... and i will not learned any...

furthermore, i don't think there is a boundary to tell u what is right or she/he is wrong....

[Jeruk 0]

Thanks for that... For your concern, I only get band 3 in Muet. (although I always read online manga...)

So I will continue to blog in English in order to improve my grammar, and after some time I will read my posts again and again. If I can detect any grammatical errors at my posts, voila.... that means I am improving...

**Emm can anybody check the grammar of the bold statements for me???

is at my posts correct or should I use on my posts??

[crazy_labelle 0]

good for u... at least you will improve yourself from time to time... hek3...

like myself... i'm watching less english tv-show... or less listening to english radio... or reading less english novels

i felt the use of my vocab and grammar is decreasing tremendously...

huhuhu... better change my lifestyle now... or else... voila...

[1nt0x1c4t3d 0]

just my suggestion(s)....

I (HAVE) decided to blog in English. (PERHAPS THERE ARE) a lot grammatical errors. I hope (SOMEONE COULD) check my article. I think this is the best way of learning to write.

If you decide to leave comment about my article, please do so at http://closepages.blogspot.com

IDEA(S) FOR (A) BLOG:

If you want to start blogging but you do not have any idea, this is the SUITABLE article for you. To drive people to your site(,) you need to have contents that suit your readers.

1.Blogging about computer and technology:

-Most of the people (WHO) like to surf (USING THE INTERNET ARE) usually attracted to gain information about computer and technology. If you blog about these things, I am sure that your blog will attract a lot of traffic.

-However, you should be aware that the (DISADVANTAGE) is that most of the current articles that you write will not be relevant after few years. This is common because technolo(G)y (REVOLVING) so fast and changes happen frequently.

2.Blogging about food / places / vacation :

-Blogging about food seem(S) to be boring. (H)owever you need to remember the fact that food still remain(S) the same all of the time. If you write about the nasi lemak you (ATE) toda(Y), after 10 years the(RE) will still (BE) some people search(ING) for "nasi lemak".

-What I want to say is, although blog(GING) about food seems to drive less traffic than technology, the contents are relevant for (A) lifetime. So blogging about food is not (SUCH) a bad idea.

3.Below, I (HAVE) state(D) a list of blog that you can write as a platform:

-Game

-fasion

-celebrit(IES)

-sports (need to (BE) update(D) frequently)

Besides, you should also (BE) aware of a few things before you start blogging:

1. (IS) your blog contents always relevant?

-If you (ARE) blogging about sports but do not like to update, your content (WOULD NOT) be relevant anymore and thus your site (WOULD) have (A) bad ranking in search engine(S).

2.How (MANY) competitors (ARE THERE)?

-Just my opinion, I think that having (FEWER) competitor(S) is good. Why? Let('S) say that I am writing about famous technology like handset. (PERHAPS) my content is good but I need to struggle so that it can reach high page ranking in search engine.

3.Do you prefer common visitor(S)?

-If you (WANT) your site to have its certain die hard fan, make sure that your blog is specialise(D) *IT'S BETTER TO USE "PRECISE" OR "SPECIFIC"*. This is because people (WILL) always find thing(S) that (ARE) specialise *AGAIN, IT'S BETTER TO USE "PRECISE" OR "SPECIFIC"*. .

-If your blog is just like my blog, it's hard to find its loyal visitor. However, you can still depend on search engine.

Then, why (AM) I still blogging? There is (JUST) a simple reason to it. I hope that I can improve my writing skills and and I want to improve (ON) my English. So why (HAVEN'T) I start(ED) blogging?? Right now(,) I am trying to blog in English (I think [THERE ARE] a lot of grammar mistakes). So if any of you find (ANY) grammar errors, I hope that you can correct (THEM) (AND LEAVE YOUR COMMENT).

Ha ha, maybe later my blog can be (A) source for students to learn English...

*hope you don't mind that I used upper casing*

PEACE...hehe!

[crazy_labelle 0]

walawey... can i sent my reports to you...

for grammatical check purpose... hok3...

[syden 0]

did anyone know how to use Microsoft Word's grammar check?

[crazy_labelle 0]

did anyone know how to use Microsoft Word's grammar check?

huhu... right click of the underlined phrase, and choose the most suitable...

[teri-chan 5]

but sumhow all those explanations given by The Helper are pretty clueless for (blank blank) me.. hehhe....

[Jeruk 0]

Thanks Yuk1l for the grammar checking.... Looks like I always make mistakes regarding will and would.

Can anyone explain to me how to use will and would, shall and should, and can and could..

[1nt0x1c4t3d 0]

You are Welcome, Jeruk...hahaha

ok..nak share lagi

...SHARING = CARING...

Let's say, it's 6pm=NOW

7pm = FUTURE

Will - you talk about the future NOW

6pm, you talk about wat u wana do @ 7pm

Example: I will eat at 7pm.

would

A ) (actually past tense)

5pm: "He will eat at 7pm"

Example: The person said he would eat at 7pm

B ) polite manner

*talking to headmaster*

Example: Sir, I would like to pay my fees.

The same goes for Can and Could

Can - future

Could - A) past

polite manner

Shall - (PRESENT TENSE shj)mcm ajak

A) Shall we go out?

We shall go out

SHOULD (ni lain skit)

A ) wajib

You should fast. (puasa)

you SHOULD have done your work.

INGAT : selepas guna MODAL (should, can, ...those above), gunalah present tense (warna biru)